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The Kid

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He wishes he could forget,
forget about his life,
forget about the past,
forget about the knife.
His life is hurting,
crumbling to the floor,
no one there to save him,
no one at the door.
no one cares for the kid,
with the scars on his heart,
hes just another face,
fading in the dark.
No one looks passed,
his innocent smile,
the kid has been dead,
inside for awhile.
His flesh will wither,
his heart will stop,
the voices in his head,
were the ones on top.
They won the battle,
and they won the war,
he has nothing,
anymore.
My deprssing mood led me to this poem. :) The kid is me if anyone wants to know.
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camguy2050's avatar
This sounds so much like my stepson he went down that path but did not return I got home from hospital the house open wide but he was not inside I wandered around and called out his name but he did not answer I thought he was playing a game I saw the light on in the shed so out there I sped I opened the door and to my surprise there he was hung to his demise I grabbed a knife and cut him down stiff as a board he fell to the ground his life was over so young and such a waist of a beautiful being  I cried out no you stupid idiot you had such a positive future in front of you but you could not see it as you were trapped in your own thought process and couldn't see through the cloud that settled around your mind if you could have just peeked through you would have seen a wonderful future in front of you but you didn't have the willpower to step out of the cloud and leave the past in the past and forge your future the way you wanted it to be it would have been hard at first but it gets easier as the years go by and you turn your life into the way you want it to be step by step 
If you are reading this and considering ending your life please consider the people around you that will miss you and that love you very much even though they don't show it enough you are loved and you will be missed greatly 
The hurt and anguish you feel when you loose a love one put a very deep hole inside you that can never be filled by anyone else but you   The pain the tears for days on end that never seem to end Andy I wish you were still here I miss you so much I would do anything to have you back and to help you through the cloud in your mind 
If there is anyone stuck in a cloud I will do my best to help you see through it 
Life is too precious to end it and leave all thous around you with a hole in there heart that they can never fill again 
So contact me on here or @ camguy2050@hotmail.com